Are You Sure You Want To Die?

by morgan   Aug 5, 2005


Death seems so tempting at first.
But how do you think you would feel laying in a Hurst?
Lying on your back, looking up at the ceiling.
After death has come, how would you be feeling?

The silk lining of the coffin on your back.
You realize that compared to this small space, your house doesn't seem like a shack.
Do you really want to find out what it looks like from a dead person's eyes?
Do you want to know how it feels when someone dies?

Would you like to watch the ones you've hurt from afar?
Would you like to seem them drive away from your funeral in their car,
Waving their last goodbye,
As just one more tear comes to their eye,
Ask your self this, are you sure you want to die?

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  • 18 years ago

    by LOST iN LOVE

    Wow, this is an amazing poem! i love it! keep up thhe good work and keep writing!! thanks for commenting on mine!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~Britty~Nloveღ

    i love that poem!!! so good!!

    ~Lotta luv~
    ~britty~

  • 19 years ago

    by Melanie

    I think this poem is really good your not telling people what to do your making them think twice really good keep writtin and cheeck out some of mine