What went wrong?

by Brittany   Aug 5, 2005


What went wrong?
we were always so Strong
the love we share was so fair
i feel like i was compared
i lay in my bed at night
i think how we were always so right
I'm so lost in this fight
i look around seeing couples in love
i feel that love is above us
we always had so much trust
i say again what went wrong?
i always felt loved by your heart
i was always as sweet as my heart could give
I've loved you tile that day you said you felt nothing
that nothing was always something.

**i dedicate this poem to my X-boyfriend Kevin*

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  • 19 years ago

    by ---AL---

    Sorry for the two comments i have a stuttering problem that extends to my mouse clicking my bad

  • 19 years ago

    by ---AL---

    Great poem... True emotion, and descent flow, good job...Unfortunately, its late at night and mind doesn't work the best lol...so if this comment seems a little half a** its because i am tired, but it is a nice poem, I say its the best one you have on here haha...and the only one...lol, look foward to reading others your write, ttyl britt...bye!

  • 19 years ago

    by ---AL---

    Great poem... True emotion, and descent flow, good job...Unfortunately, its late at night and mind doesn't work the best lol...so if this comment seems a little half a** its because i am tired, but it is a nice poem, I say its the best one you have on here haha...and the only one...lol, look foward to reading others your write, ttyl britt...bye!

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