Great poem... True emotion, and descent flow, good job...Unfortunately, its late at night and mind doesn't work the best lol...so if this comment seems a little half a** its because i am tired, but it is a nice poem, I say its the best one you have on here haha...and the only one...lol, look foward to reading others your write, ttyl britt...bye!

Great poem... True emotion, and descent flow, good job...Unfortunately, its late at night and mind doesn't work the best lol...so if this comment seems a little half a** its because i am tired, but it is a nice poem, I say its the best one you have on here haha...and the only one...lol, look foward to reading others your write, ttyl britt...bye!

Sorry for the two comments i have a stuttering problem that extends to my mouse clicking my bad