aw...such a sweet poem..and amazing!!! shes one lucky gurl!!!

This poem is awesome it was really sad at first and then it turned into the sweetest poem i've ever heard. Really good work keep it real!
nikki

Holy potatoes, Mr Burke. That is one of the best poems I've ever read. It is so well polished I can see my reflection. Absolutely brilliant. I think I have a new favourite for my list. Do the world a favour and keep writing, man.