by Britney Aug 5, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Saying goodbye is never easy. |
THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM!!!!PLZ COMMENT ON MINE CALLED NEVER THANX! |
by kiesha
That was beautifully written but very sad. There is a good message in your poem, it really made me think about things. Keep it up! |
by Tabitha
i loved this poem, it made me really think |
by Mandy Lou
This is a wonderful poem and it happened to me. I really did just watch my grandmother slowly dying. I did all that I could to keep her healthy longer, but, she was really sick. I tried so hard to tell her everyday that I loved her and to make a new memory with her so that when she was gone, I'd remember her as she would have liked me to....Sowwi, I just wanted to say great poem, but, there you go! 5/5! Beautiful and very touching! |
Very nice...easily relatable to I think...so true, the first line and everything...good work |