This was so sad. I loved this poem though. your flow was excellent as was the message behind it. keep up the great work :)

Absolutly excellent, gave me chills when I read it. Keep it up:)

Now this is an awesome poem. I could feel your emotion, rather than just see it. That takes a great writer.

Keep it up! :)

Very nice...easily relatable to I think...so true, the first line and everything...good work

xxx

This is a wonderful poem and it happened to me. I really did just watch my grandmother slowly dying. I did all that I could to keep her healthy longer, but, she was really sick. I tried so hard to tell her everyday that I loved her and to make a new memory with her so that when she was gone, I'd remember her as she would have liked me to....Sowwi, I just wanted to say great poem, but, there you go! 5/5! Beautiful and very touching!

i loved this poem, it made me really think

That was beautifully written but very sad. There is a good message in your poem, it really made me think about things. Keep it up!

THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM!!!!PLZ COMMENT ON MINE CALLED NEVER THANX!