oH yEaH lAnCe, I LuVed It 2!!

Seriously though, i really like it. *Sigh* Pretty depressing because i can really relate. No confidence = regrets later on :-/

Aken Sol

"That living without her is hard to bare"
it should be bear not bare, those damn words confuse me too.

Do the people who comment even read your poems? Sometimes I wonder...

Okay so at a first glance, I was worried that this poem was gonna rhyme, and that the rhythm was going to be so hard-set that it was going to ruin the message BUT suprise! it was great. it didn't rhyme, thank god, and the rhythm flowed and twirled and...ya know, spun in eddies and crap... w/e.

I would say that the second half of the poem was stronger than the first, and that your use of creative language has increased tenfold since the first poem of yours i've ever read. good work

I agree the girl is very lucky to have a guy like you like her sooo much. I agree with what Sean Allen said your poem is stronger in the second part. I like how you use big, intelligent, genius words (lol) i mean some people use 1st grade words throughtout their poems and there like 16 or 17. Its a great poem very well written keep writing!