Lost??

by Bleeding-Insaity   Aug 5, 2005


I need to get away
I cant take this anymore
I don't care
I just don't want to be here

Give me a knife
I'll be just fine
Good-bye to this life
That screwed me over
Good-bye to anybody
That really cared

* Thats my first poem... can you please comment i just want to know if i should continue writing*
Thank-you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Hey girl! Love ur poems!

    Keep writting what's in your heart. If it's the way u need to express urself then keep doing it! Sometimes it's the only escape!

    Take carez girl =)

    Lizzy xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by RedRose

    Of course you shud keep writing. poetry isnt there to entertain people but to show a side to your heart that you dont get to show off. Poetry is the art of words. your poem is dark has a lot of sadness in such a small amount of words.

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