Of course you shud keep writing. poetry isnt there to entertain people but to show a side to your heart that you dont get to show off. Poetry is the art of words. your poem is dark has a lot of sadness in such a small amount of words.

Hey girl! Love ur poems!

Keep writting what's in your heart. If it's the way u need to express urself then keep doing it! Sometimes it's the only escape!

Take carez girl =)

Lizzy xoxoxo