by Clay Aug 5, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
The Storm, threatening |
by Schmeg
Tis was an awesome poem too! It was so deep! Like the way you write is so intensifying and you feel like you are there. I Love it! |
i have to say that was wonderful... the words are so touching I can tell it's coming from your heart.. great job.. |
by Ana Vidovic
OMG... that was absolutely brilliant! This is one of my favorite poems i have ever read!! I totally understand the metaphor you used. It's not obvious and thats what i love about it. I actually had to read between the lines!! Also, i love how the black rain represents your sins and how you can't get away but you cut your ties with 'her' and what a mistake. Absolutely brilliant!!!:D |
by pag
it's an aswome poem, i was writen beautifully, good job, my favorite part is the ending, "Locked forever in this land |