Taking Us Apart

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Aug 5, 2005


I'm sick of crying
Inside I'm dying
I've given up trying
I don't feel like smiling
I can't stop sighing
I'm sick of their lying
How can they be prying
Us apart?

*writen when my life became BLEH again*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    Ahh who are they???? lol im so curious now!!! i liked this it was really simple i think you used very word that rhymed with crying, which is cool i think it could have been longer with maybe i little more depth ya know? anyways ill give it a 4/5 cause it was a good poem

  • 19 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    Wow...this is soooooo good...i have been there...where somebody is trying to break u up with ur baby....wow...thats what gets me pissed off...wow...well just be strong and believe in him...if he loved you he'll be there 4 you...even thoe you are going thru all those things....if my baby could do it...so can urs

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacob M Parnell

    Weird scheme.
    But was pretty damn good.
    5/5
    ~JP~

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