Weird scheme.
But was pretty damn good.
5/5
~JP~

Wow...this is soooooo good...i have been there...where somebody is trying to break u up with ur baby....wow...thats what gets me pissed off...wow...well just be strong and believe in him...if he loved you he'll be there 4 you...even thoe you are going thru all those things....if my baby could do it...so can urs

Ahh who are they???? lol im so curious now!!! i liked this it was really simple i think you used very word that rhymed with crying, which is cool i think it could have been longer with maybe i little more depth ya know? anyways ill give it a 4/5 cause it was a good poem