Counting Stars

by Manda   Aug 5, 2005


I start to count the stars,
And lose track at a hundred and nine.
I start to think of you,
As I try a second time.

I start to think of you,
Your sweet words, your love, and care.
There’s 28, 29, and 30,
How I wish I could be there.

How I wish I could be in your arms,
You don’t know how great this thought is.
There’s 56, 57, and 58,
You don’t know how much I want a kiss.

As I start to reach 80,
The stars form your name.
I shake my head,
And they are back to being the same.

I hope you are always at my side,
Oh there goes 93 and 94.
I want to love you for all time,
This is for sure.

As I reach 100,
A chilly breeze goes through me.
One thought popped in my head,
Do you think we’re meant to be?

I’ve always believed,
If it’s meant to be, it’ll be.
But are you sure,
You will never leave me?

I am still counting,
There goes a hundred and nine.
Another thought forms in my head,
Will you always wanna be mine?

I reach 117,
And I decide to quit.
I realize every star represents every year I wanna be with you,
And there’s so many, it’s endless.

*i know it sucks!!! well please rate and message me on what you think.*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Unity

    i rly likie this poem :D :D :D ish boootahful im sitting at course reading it .. nd i got a tear in my eye, h0w bootahful is that ..i rly like this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sooooooooooo gud 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Lisa

    "I start to count the stars,
    And lose track at a hundred and nine.
    I start to think of you,
    As I try a second time."

    This was a really good poem. I really liked that part. Thanks for commenting on mine.