Love

by lil miss sexy   Aug 5, 2005


Love is when you cant sleep at night because you are thinking of him
love is when you cant concentrate on anything because of him
love is when you are always talking about him
love is when you cant stop thinking about him every second of everyday

love is beautiful in every way
love can hurt you
love can last forever
love can mean a lot of different things
but to me love is what i want it to be

i love someone for who they are not how they look
i love someone for how they make me feel
i fell in love and now i cant sleep because i am always thinking of how he makes me feel and how sweet he is
i cant concentrate when someone is talking to me because i am thinking of him
i cant do anything without thinking of him
i always miss him

~not one of my good ones i want to know what you think of it so i can try to make my next one better~
thank you for taking the time to read

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    In my opinion...i think you should put the ending in a different way..make it so its not soo much in a paragraph, you know??...nice job tho...
    ~Sandra~

  • 19 years ago

    by Jenn

    it is good but it could flow a lil better but if you ment it to be free writting than it's perfect it has meaning and that makes it great!
    xoxox BJ

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    Your poem was good, you should try a rhyme scheme when you write the next one, it flows nicer that way.

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