Love, Death, Tragedy

by Unloved ♥   Aug 5, 2005


It started off as a fairytale
But then it made a wrong turn
Our love failed

After all those kisses and lies
Our love failed
My heart cries

I wanted this nightmare to be over
But it never went away
Fight and fight after another

Nothing could stop this
Nothing could end the hurt
I can't even remember the last kiss

Tears ran down our faces
But we wouldn't comfort eachother like we did
Our hearts weren't together as they were, they were in different places

One day you couldn't take it anymore
Seeing both of us in pain
So you killed me and let my wings soar

You shot me through the heart
And then you shot yourself
Our lives now torn apart

We were buried next to each other
Our friends and family heart brokened
Both of us were cutters

Our tombstones were joined together
We finally have our wish
We ended our pain and we'll stay together forever

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Nice work, but somehow it doesn't rhyme. It has a lot of feelings and emotion in it. Keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley

    Good job. keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Manda

    whoa. deep, very deep. 5/5 awesome poem!

    ~Manda

  • 19 years ago

    by CHOKE

    AwWwWw BaBeS tHiS pOeM iS sWeEt AnD sAd...I gIvE iT a 5/5!
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