Killer In the Shadows

by SuperJenius   Aug 5, 2005


There is a killer in the shadows waiting for you to pass by
You'll never see it coming untill you're eye to eye
It creeps up on you
When you're expecting it the least
It is a heartless fearless merciless beast
It will tear you up inside
But at first it all feels good
It feels as though the world is safe and everything is great
But remember there's a killer in the shadows its expecting you to come it'll claim your heart for his own and make your body feel numb
This killer unmasked is a monster called LoVe
and in the end you'll be hurt by everything it does

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kendall

    That ending was wicked suprising the poem could use more.. how do i word this.. flow? i suppose? like it seems more like a paragraph but perhaps i'm not reading it right.
    the theme was really cool though

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very surprising ending. Catchy beginning. You could still work on the flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samey

    That was awesome! keep it up!
    Samey

  • 19 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    GREAT POEM,FULL OF EMOTION. MY POETRY LIKE YOURS IS FUELED BY EMOTION. I WOULD LOVE TO SEE WHAT YOU COULD DO WITH SOME OF THE OTHER EMOTIONS LIKE EXCITEMENT OR HAPPINESS. GOOD JOB