A good poem, your rhmes were very unstructured and some of the words were pushed like they didn't belong. However I really like the message of the poem, strong but sad words. Keep writing!
luv kt

i enjoyed this one! had a great message to send to its readers.

Mike

The meaning is very deep...and i liked the way you worded it. You have a smooth talent of choosing words. ;) And also a talent of making me sad with your poems...they chip a piece of my heart off in a way.

Peaces. //Ari\\

wow! that was absolutely beautiful! I loved this poem so much and please keep writing!

It's a good poem but I think that using the number 2 kind of made it look silly.

this is a very good poem! and keep up on the writing! if you get a chance...you should post more poems! you have alot of good talent! 5/5
leanna

Good poem, and I do agree with the others when they said you are drifting away, and it does seem like the words are being pushed to belong, but other than that.. Its a great poem. Keep up the good work!

I love your your writtin grl your good

Well...there are a couple of grammatical errors you may want to fix (i.e. "you" instead of "you're")....this poem was pretty good, but it can be somewhat frustrating for a reader to read a poem that offers some rhyming in the beginning and no rhyming near the end. Good message though, good poem.

Saying goodbye is always sad...but in a way the end of something gives us a chance for a new beginning. I broke up with my boyfriend a few days ago..we'd been goin out for 9 months..so I can relate to this. nice work keep it up.
Christina

It is great this poem and you expressed yourself well, it was a bit shaky (the structure) but overall i'm impressed. 5/5!

Really nice, and well written.

Wow thats one lucky dude.....4/5 kinda boring sorry

Not your best i was thrown off a couple times by the way you rhymed sometimes but not always all in all good job but could use a litttttle work

Omg omg omg!!! WONDERFUL POEM! I love it just love it! I am going to show it to my boyfriend. =D Keep up the work.

Ps: WRITE MORE. =D

The only thing i didnt liek was when you put"2" mabye to make it more heart to heart you should spell it out. but none the less amazing 5.5

I love ur poem but i love even more all ur quotes, U have a talent there. Keep writing CHICA CIAO... =-)

Another nice nice nice poem... sad though! I like your choice of words for this one, very nice!!! I am speechless. You are so talented! I am ading you to my favs!

Good poem
could be better...
why dont u rephrase in some places
but over all good job
5/5
love
amy

This is really good! Just like all of your other peoms! lol 5/5 Keep it up
Becky
xoxo