Helloness..

aww man that poem is deadly! the flow was great and while reading it you don't know what the end will be like!!

great work!!

Lisa x)

I like the simpleness of this poem and it's true that such simple things can really make your day. And thanks for your comment.

I have only read a few of your poems so far but I really like the ideas you convey in your poetry and the way you express them. I also enjoy your style of writing.

This poem seemed to founder a bit near the beginning but overall it is still an excellent work.