Great writing! really sweet. jesx

Hun I really loved it..yours is so much better than I could write and I love how you can express all this :-) The world needs more guys like you and Tennesse could definately use some too ...Great work
+~+~Kris~+~+

I'm gonna join My1 and say "aww!" This poem is wonderfully layed out and radiates with the love I'm sure it's written through. I love the focus on the poem, a bright future for two people and their future family. I know thats one of my biggest hopes, but first I have to grow up and find a good guy. :D Kepp up the wonderfull, amazing, thoughtfull work.

The ending is great! I loved it! =)