Forbidden Love

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Aug 6, 2005


Crying all day,
Crying all night.
This ain't no fun,
It's just not right!

They're trying to take us apart,
It's just not fair,
All they can do is judge,
Him by his looks and hair.

Can't they see that I love him?
Can't they see they're wrong?
I hate all of this,
I've loved him so long.

I miss Jesse,
I should see him today.
But I am forbidden,
For many a day.

So I'll sit here and cry,
Pretend that I'm dead.
Maybe tomorrow, when I wake,
This'll all be a dream made by my sleepy head.

*writen out of the love in my heart..*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    Who's stopping you? parents or just people in general? anywasy great job

    Can't they see that I love him?
    Can't they see they're wrong?
    I hate all of this,
    I've loved him so long.

    that was my favorite part, i think the rhyming of this poem was simple but i dunno i just really liked it i think it flowed well and surprisingly i've never read a poem about this topic, which is weird now that i think about it because this is a common situation, weird, anyways amazing job, love new things, 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacob M Parnell

    GOod poem, I figured id read another, eventually ill read em all, but its 12 AM here, and ive got practice in the morning at 6 so goodnight, and another 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by sayo

    thats right dont let any1 tear you 2 apart and judgement is so omg not right i mean look at all those pretty gurls most are really shallow (umm no offence) well check out my poems sometime thanxz :)

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