Comments : Forbidden Love

  • 19 years ago

    by sayo

    thats right dont let any1 tear you 2 apart and judgement is so omg not right i mean look at all those pretty gurls most are really shallow (umm no offence) well check out my poems sometime thanxz :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacob M Parnell

    GOod poem, I figured id read another, eventually ill read em all, but its 12 AM here, and ive got practice in the morning at 6 so goodnight, and another 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    Who's stopping you? parents or just people in general? anywasy great job

    Can't they see that I love him?
    Can't they see they're wrong?
    I hate all of this,
    I've loved him so long.

    that was my favorite part, i think the rhyming of this poem was simple but i dunno i just really liked it i think it flowed well and surprisingly i've never read a poem about this topic, which is weird now that i think about it because this is a common situation, weird, anyways amazing job, love new things, 5/5