by Lenny Aug 6, 2005
category :
Fun, humor /
other
(Pretty random, I warned you) |
by Drew Gold
At the beginning, you were goin really strong.. the language madeway for the image of what u were writing,.. then it seems like it breaks off somewhere in the middle and just sounded weird to me.. maybe its the contrasting language or maybe im crazy.. this seemed a bit forced\/,.. overall good piece th0, does tell a story and it might just not be my style.. |
by sarah lutz
This is a kickass poem I like it A LOT! |