Hard time

by sayo   Aug 6, 2005


It's hard to talk about something i kept deep inside for all this time i wish i was better but it seems every time i end up being the one crying it hurts because i don't know if I'm being loved or being pushed aside please tell me if I'm wrong or if this is just a lazily written song its not love well it is but not the one true type of love its the love of those supposedly close after four years of pain i have a hard time keeping inside what was there for such along time and i end up crying more then before so as i sit here asking god for repent about something i didn't even commit i write about all the pain thats so dam hard to keep inside i mean after so long its just to dam hard of a time...Please forgive me for the hatred inside but it's just to hard of a time...to keep it all inside...

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  • 19 years ago

    by corrina

    your welcome and thanks for the comment

  • 19 years ago

    by corrina

    really great poem sounds like you have the same problems as me lol
    well keep writen and hey ill tell ya a secret
    when i want to write a poem i read someone elses poem and on untill i get an idea on ryming and what to write about as long as i dont copy then its ok to do so well ttfn

  • 19 years ago

    by Joey P

    Well let me say thanx for the comment, I appreciate it. I kno how u feel about this 1.Keep writing, looking forward of more of ur poems.

    Joey.P

  • 19 years ago

    by gorgeouslilmissy

    hey! thanks for commenting on my poem!! =)
    this poem is very good!! *5/5*
    i have read a few of your others and they are really good too!! your a great writer!
    i will comment on some of your others too.
    xx