Blind

by Claire*   Aug 6, 2005


She’s all alone in the dark,
No one can find her,
See her, help her,
It's like she is invisible
Why she is hiding?
Not even she knows.
She finds herself locked in a room
A small dark room,
She's scared so scared.
There’s a door to the left of her,
And another door to the right.
She opens the one on the right.
Heaven.
She finds heaven beyond the door,
She closes the door.
She walks over to the other door.
She opens it.
She can't breathe, can hardly even see.
Everything is so blurry.
People screaming so loud her ears begin to hurt.
Hell.
Hell is behind the door on the right.
She wonders.
She sit in the corner for hours thinking of all the good things she’s done,
And all the bad.
She thinks to herself,
That she has done to much bad to go to heaven.
She thinks she has done so much bad that she is unworthy for God.
No,
Never.
She could never be unworthy for God, but still,
She says she doesn’t deserve to be in Heaven.
Hell couldn’t be that bad right?
No, Hell is worse then any sin..
Ever.
She opens the door to heaven once more,
So bright, so beautiful.
Clouds, the ground is made of clouds.
So fluffy and thick.
She takes on step in she's walking,
On clouds!
She is so amazed.
But then she steps back out of the door,
Into the dark and lonely room.
She opens the door on the left,
She opens the door to hell.
Closes her eyes,
And jumps in.
She falls on the ground.
It burns, it burns her feet.
Her eyes she cant open them,
her body it is burning,
She immediately regrets this decision,
She would rather be in the dark room forever,
With nothing to eat,
No one to talk to but herself,
With nothing in the room,
Except the two doors,
To Heaven and to Hell..

Which door would you open and jump into?
Hell?
No matter how much you sin in your life,
You would never be unworthy to God...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Claire*

    Plz comment my poem..this was the first one I wrote and I need to know what people think of it..Thanks!