great job glad i could help ya with it
it rocks
love ya sami

o man that was amazing, great write sweetie keep it up. 5/5 def. im speechless
-kit

that is so deep shit..loved it

Love.Live.Life

wow, it's outstanding!

wow. 5/5

That is really good make a part 2 please

I love that poem! you are very very talanted! thanks so much for writting it.<3333333
-Summer-

that was a great poem,good one!!!!

the poem was a nice read but there are parts that need work, sometimes it felt like you couldn't think of what to put so you just put a non-ryming word in there, nice over-all job 4/5

wow so good blar blar blar its gr8 idk wht 2 say so blar blar the blars count as gooooooood in my words gr8 all gd c ya xx

wow!! great poem really awesome ! 5/5 :)

wow thats a great poem you need to thank you friends a little more it was wounderful heart felt hope to see more

*cries* It's beautiful, i love it. It's so sad. It's kinda like "Love's Curse". *hugs* Keep up the good work sweets.

~Jessica

Helloness..

Man this poem was deadly you just wanna read more..each stanza keeps you stuck in..pm me when you write part 2..

good luck with that..

Lisa x)

i liked this a lot it was written well i wish i could write this way plz comment on mine

Hey Emmy What's up that's really good i Likey let me write a poem and yeah okay byez

wow, great poem. I loved it keep up the good work.
~ItalianStallion~

this was brilliant i now exactly how this person feels from personal experieces.
Youv explained it so well

Althogh its a traditional subject to write about, but I believe that everyone his unique way writting about something. and you do have your style, and its really nice to share writing a poem with friends, I love this idea.

but I think the girl shouldn't kill her self, If the boy left her for another, he wouldnt even worth hurting herself for such a person. That's how i think things should be with such people
That was so sad.

much Respect,
Rua Francis

i loved ur poem it was really good i enjoyed it