love it!!!! Who's it about???

Good job. It was a little short though; I recommend you make it a little longer. However, you did an awesome job, you got your point across well. Nice. Keep writing and never give up. Take care. Peace.

Short but Sweet, Excellent poem.
~Smile Always~

this is a cute poem!! GOOD JOB!!!
it's a little short never stop you have a talet for writting poems

Thats like my favrite poem but its awsome