Another great write. As usual, I love your language, giving the poem the perfect atmosphere to capture the reader into the piece, and the imagery you set is telling the story within itself.

I love the objective of this piece and the way you put the act into place. The dark comparisons set the perfect mood, and the descent into darkness of which you describe throughout is drawn to a scale of poetic skill and structure that creates the act and pulls all comparisons together.
Excellent