by XnotaprettygirlX Aug 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
This little girl is afraid to go home |
Omg......... that poem was so.... good it brought tears to my eyes... i loved it....you are so talented.... |
by Stacey
Hey, |
by NannO
Wow. that was very powerful.. and it was detailed n showed the cruelty behind child abuse.. ur rhyme was gud, tho the flow was off in some places, but ur wording was gr8 |
So sad to think things like that actualy happen somewhere!!!! Good poem.. I love it!!! Keep it up!! |
wow it makes me sick to think that these things actualy happen but your poem does a good job explaining the hurt and misery the child of the bad parent goes through good job on getting the message out in a well written poem |