that was a good poem sad but good

im very against child abuse !! i dont think anyone is for it hun, unless they are sick. as for the poem, it nearly made me cry :'(

well i hate child abuse!!! im 16 now nd i have been being abused since i was about 3 so this poeem is really touching being abused is the worst thing ever i hatee my dad for it im thinking of going to the police now that i am 16!! its horrible!

how horriblely sad

all i can say is "wow"

oh wow!! i actually cried...i have friends u get abused, and i know how it feels....great poem, keep writing!!!!!!!!! 100/5 from me! lol
lots of love 4ever!!!!!!!!!!
Sarah

omg...that is soOo sad.....by her own father? and onlie three? and was abused? das so sad. well i really like the poem.

That is a really good poem. My dad abused me and my sisters. People all over shoould read this.

Nice poem, touching, I wish we had no abusers in the world. Keep it up!
Laterz,
Shirlz

i love the poem! but its very sad

OMG THAT WAS SOO SAD IT IT TRUE????

Oh My God! that si a realli good poem - too bad its about a horrible truth - its sorta like My Name Is Sarah - which is the main poem for an association against child abuse. they're realli great poems but the truth is so hurtful....keep up the excellent poems...!

wow...brilliant poem. yet so sad =( i really hope its not true... my dad used to come home drunk, quite often...and he used to hit me too... not badly.. but you know, it hurts deep down. child abuse is terrible. your poem was very powerful...full of emotion. extremely well written. keep it up xx

DOWN WIV CHILD ABUSE WE SHOULD MAKE A CAMPAIGN!!!!

wow it makes me sick to think that these things actualy happen but your poem does a good job explaining the hurt and misery the child of the bad parent goes through good job on getting the message out in a well written poem

So sad to think things like that actualy happen somewhere!!!! Good poem.. I love it!!! Keep it up!!

Wow. that was very powerful.. and it was detailed n showed the cruelty behind child abuse.. ur rhyme was gud, tho the flow was off in some places, but ur wording was gr8
keep it up
nannoush

Hey,
the ending part:

"her dad kills her
leaves her out in the cold to suffer
this girl is only 3
and was murdered by her own daddy!!"

sounds a little clumsy and forced. the rest of it was absolutely fantastic and SO sad! :'( Very touching :)

Omg......... that poem was so.... good it brought tears to my eyes... i loved it....you are so talented....