I see this girl

by >> Beautifully Mistaken   Aug 6, 2005


I see this girl,
all i see is a frown,
no smile to be found.

I see this girl,
with a black tear stained face,
shes looking like such a waste of space.

I see this girl,
with cuts on her wrist,
shes someone who wont be missed.

I see this girl,
holding a knife,
i can tell shes thinking about taking her life.

I see this girl,
with suicide on her mind,
for her life has been to her, so very unkind.

I see this girl,
fall to the floor,
as she made her final wish, for no more.

I see this girl,
staring right in my direction,
shes my own reflection.

*please vote and comment, thanks

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  • 18 years ago

    by Desi

    OMG I LOVE IT TOTALLY GOIN TO PUT IT ON MY FAVORITES!!!! I LOVE IT!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Desi

    Damn thats deep and thats how i feel.....its one of the best poems i have ever heard. keep it up! ~desi~

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Yeh that was an awesome poem. so sad though...i know exactly how you feel...or at least i relate a whole lot to this poem...
    which is a bad thing i guess. hope you're ok
    take care x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    5/5..beautiful poem..stays trong keep ya head up

    luvya
    angel

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven

    Great poem!

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