very nice, have another 5 ^_^

Awwl.. very sweet. I loved it, Nice flow and surprise ending.

Hmmm... not the best flow for some reason. 4/5.

I really liked this poem, simply because it is what most people go through when they become older, wiser. The excitement and flare of christmas seems to disappear when you realise that it's all a lie. Originality is shown here. Kim x

we all go through this, and if you haven't...welcome to the real world! haha but it was great and actually it was different, grea tjob! it flowed nicely and i enjoyed it! 5/5!

I feel like chistmas isnt the same now that i no i just love watching my brother belive in him though!!!
*cheak my poems out*

'Poignant'. (not sure what it means) That's sad though! I feel the same way, but its sad how that happens, ya know? Love ya lots!!!!!