Hand In Need

by Simon Hayes   Aug 6, 2005


Beyond a crimson tide of sorrow,
Gasping for light when we find no love.
A hand or two in need we borrow,
To sail upon air like a soaring dove.

© Simon Hayes 06/08/05

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  • 19 years ago

    by erely

    The imagery is really fantastic...good writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    It's such an inspiring work that subdued me by it clear structure behind which the words have a profound meaning that comes deep to ones heart. The metaphor of the soaring dove is my fave line, it seems so fondly created and is the complete opposite to the crimson tide of sorrow. Hope for love and the pain of a broken heart, this all is united in one great piece of work. It's simply outstanding.

    Keep up with your unique style
    Lots of love
    Sabine

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