by Simon Hayes Aug 6, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Solitary, peaceful, colour of fire, |
by Angie
Short, sweet and loving........ |
by HOLLY ARMER
This is very short, but it convey's so much. I like the usage of color, it adds to the brilliance of this piece~Holly |
by sarah
That poem is really creative i love all of the ideas you throw at the reader nice imagination. |
by erely
I really like your writings good work.... |
Great write, I love your structure that makes the words flow. Though the poem is so short it has much intensity, last line is my fave, brillantly described :-) |