Very cute write ! The last stanza is my favourite one and a great end to a brilliantly written work .

Keep it up :-)
Lots of love
Sabine

P.S.: Please, read some work of mine and comment and vote, too. Thanks.

Really cute. reminds me of my first kiss... very descriptive. love it. 5/5 luved it.

Awww!!! SO freakin' cute!!! i ABSOLUTELY love it....it's a beautifully written piece and it flows REALLY well. Keep up the good work!!!:):):):)

always,
*~*xxBaBi_GrrLxx*~*

p.s. Please comment on some of my poems or vote on the quotes!!! i would REALLY appreciate it!!

Awww! Very cute and sweet poem. Has a lot of desciptive words and the rhyming was good too.

Beautifully written ! good thing you started writing again ! keep up the good work !