Life or Suicide

by LindsayFound   Aug 6, 2005


Back and forth, always the same.
They think our emotions are just a game.
Though we act like empty shells,
We're just trying to make it through this living hell.
We want to end it all,
But our fears won't let us fall.
We can't end it, but can't go on,
But in the end, one will have won.
You are the only one who can decide,
Now chose:Life or suicide.

***8/4/05***
Plz V/C!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Awesome poem! You definatly can write Your poems rock!

  • 19 years ago

    by LinkinParkFreak

    this is my favorite poem by you...you did an exclent job...straight up 5.0!!! awesome job...

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥

    i like ur poems and dont say that u kno they suk cuz if u knew that they did then y waste ur time writing!!! lol!!!! well im here 2 tell u that u can rite and dont let n-e one tell u different.look at my poems plzzzzzz.take care.keep up ur great good!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by _(fallen apart)_

    i love that its so good! your really talented im sure you will do well in the future, keep it up xox if u dont mind please look at some of my poems and comment (even though none of them are as good as this) xXx

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