Strong write ! The opening "From all the promises you didn't keep,
Just please make this one deep, And stay with me even after I fall asleep" is brilliantly written and as the last line is, too. The whole structure of your made the word flow and espacially the last stanza is wonderfully written and with so much emotion.

Keep it :)
Lots of love
Sabine

P.S.: Please, read some of my work and comment, too. Thanks.

This is really good. Thanks for the comment. I like this a lot. Great job!