by XnotaprettygirlX Aug 7, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Their wings spread out |
Well i have to say u i look diffrent at them now |
by Tara
Lol wow amazing poem, beautifully written and i loved every words...your poem was fresh and unquie |
by Stacey
Very well written, tho perhaps a little too strange for my liking. :P |
by Fig
(didya know that "no one suspects the butterflies" is a quote from the simpsons? i love that episode!) |
by Fig
Hey, i love the way you just destry the cliqued feeling around butterflys. that makes this a great poem teh way youve taken something soo over used and warped to be something origonal. i like some of the images you use aswell, but this poem does seem a little bit restircted by form and rhyme. im not suggesting you chasnge it at all i love it as it is, but i really think your writing style will benefit from a freer form. youve used some fantastic images |