Very very good poem.

Vic, I love the way u write. U have such honesty in your words, and with honesty comes a sweetness that many writers forgot about so many times. Your poem reminded me of falling in love. At least that great feeling. Keep it up!!!

Ahhh, thats sweet. i like it. your poems are all great, but i especially like this one
*keep smiling*
~`*Tessa*`~

Wow that is one of the best poems i ever read. great job!

Beautiful poem my friend, youve got talent, keep writting strong

Very sweet poem! I loved it! Flowed great! YOu have got talent girl!

Love
Haily

A little bunchy in away...
More like a long paragraph... Understood never-the-less... You've got talent... Use it to its full potential and you'll never go wrong... Always keep writing and the best of luck from Joel.

Talk to you soon