Wow, this is amazing !!
It's beautifully written, yet so dark and twisted !!
I really enjoyed reading this.
Well Done !!

<3 Charli XxX

Sweet awesomeness and sheer delight!
it sound so gorgeous!
Really great poem!

<3 ash

A wicked dark poem! Great work dark poems have always been my favorite. Very well written and good imagery! Take Care! Brooke~

good

Nice poem. I enjoye the imagery you used to descirbe things in the poem. This is a very original idea. Something a bit rare here as I see...

XxX))Eclipse((XxX

THAT WAS SO AWSOME, AND UNBELIVIABLY CREATIVE.

wow. awesome poem. you get my 5. keep the great work up

Wow very dark indeed..... awesome write, incredibly creative. Loved it.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Loved your wording in this one. Truly an awesome piece. hugs, love, Ann

lmao @ "good"..smh.. you Slow mayNe... still love yo ass doe.. n yo poemz iz fiyah mayne... you ah hella good writa niKkz... stay reah n dat trill azz guh yu iz nah sayin... 1..