Wow.. I've been reading through your poems and you've got quite the talent. I love the emotion you put into them. I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep it up!
-Johanna

Its a very good poem, BUT, i can't agree with you, hate isn't beautiful, its the father of wars. if thats the only reason you wake up , then u why wake up, dont spend life on hate, spend it on love...but...good poem anyway