by Jacob M Parnell Aug 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Today is Tomorrow. |
Wow, thats amazing . I 've read few poems and i mean few (only like 3) really good poems about how life is truly interpreted and I can really relate to this. 5/5. I defenitly can say I get the message. |
Wow, thats amazing . I 've read few poems and i mean few (only like 3) really good poems about how life is truly interpreted and I can really relate to this. 5/5. I defenitly can say I get the message. |
by Polly
I like this poem alot. The rhyme is good, without sounding forced and I like your style. Keep writing and take care |
Hey, you're really good with the whole rhyming stuff ya know, alot of people find it difficult to make things rhyme without using the same old words. |
by SEAN
Cleverly written poem keep it up |