by InMyWorld Aug 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Note: this is a song. |
by Little Dot
Wonderful job on this poem, it has a good rhymthe going on. I can relate to this poem really well. Keep up the great work. |
Very good poem it flows very well and has a great structure. |
Thats really deep and your great at writing. I hope everything gets better for you. |
by stephanie
wow i came in here 2 return the favor of commenting on ur poems and say thanku 4 commenting on mine but this poem right here got the best of me its really good and i can relate alot keep up the good work and im in the process of writing a part 2 onto my poem right now |
wow...that reminds me of what ive been going through. good job i really liked that |