very, very good poem!! I loved it!! Its just how i feel in my relationship with my boyfriend. What to do? hmm.. its not easy.

"Hate being like this, hate feeling together but yet alone" lov
ed that sentence... its abit confusing but at the same time easy to see what you mean in my case. You are in a relationship, you have some one to lean on, but yet you feel alone.

Keep the good work up!
Kind regards Kikkixxx