by bucky Aug 7, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Dearest child let it be known |
'Let time reveal it’s secrets to you one by one' I love that line! good! i like this! the ryming scheme is pretty good |
by kiesha
That was very beautifully written. It touched my heart. Keep up the good work. |
by Kelsey
Watch the first line but other than that, this is another really good poem. |
by Renee
"Remember to smile, remember to dance" |
I loved this poem..beautiful message behind it. Great job! :) |