wow, i really liked it..it had a good flow. sometimes its hard to rhyme evey line like you did but good job

Insightful and honest poem. Keep it up!
-Kate

I loved this poem..beautiful message behind it. Great job! :)

"Remember to smile, remember to dance"

I adore that line. Great job. Your poems seem to be the type that I would like to read when I need encouragement or motivation. keep up the good work, and don't change your style. its effective and unique.

Take Care,
Renee

Watch the first line but other than that, this is another really good poem.

That was very beautifully written. It touched my heart. Keep up the good work.

'Let time reveal it’s secrets to you one by one' I love that line! good! i like this! the ryming scheme is pretty good