Remind me of you

by Mark   Aug 7, 2005


Everything i see
Everything i do
Somehow ends up
Reminding me of you

It may seem crazy
But I'm telling you its true
Everything i see and do
Reminds me of you

I listen to the birds
I hear them singing your name
I look at the clouds
And see your smiling face

I listen to the wind
I hear it whispering you name
I look in the river
And see your complexion again

I'm telling you this
I'm being true
Everything i see
Everything i do
Somehow ends up
Reminding me of...
YOU

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  • 19 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    aw.. thats soo sweet.. i love it.. and yeah the poems kinda tru i do knoe someone who got swept away from me because of all his auditions and stuff but he isnt big yet.. just broadway and commercials..and as much as it sucks for me.. ive seen him work.. and hes good.. soo im still happy for him.. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by inlove

    awww thats so nice, and its so good!
    geez ur really good!!
    u got talent boi ...

    God Bless,
    Love ya Sam xo

  • 19 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    So cute ! 5/5 The structure of the poem made your words flow and the repeat of these four lines "Everything i see
    Everything i do
    Somehow ends up
    Reminding me of you" give the message much more intensity. The metaphors in the third and the fourth stanzas were very well done, brought a picture to my mind which is pretty good. :-)

    Keep it up
    Lots of love
    Sabine

  • 19 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    oh very good, i know the feeling but i luv how u described it. awesome job.
    take care,
    peace
    *rach*

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsi

    Great job!! Very expressive!! You made it rhyme but then you made it make sense!! Keep writing! 5/5

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