awww that was so sweet i like how you used nature to describe this girl very cute love it

love andrea xxxx

awww that was sweet mark, keep it up ..

luv rach
xx

Great job!! Very expressive!! You made it rhyme but then you made it make sense!! Keep writing! 5/5

oh very good, i know the feeling but i luv how u described it. awesome job.
take care,
peace
*rach*

So cute ! 5/5 The structure of the poem made your words flow and the repeat of these four lines "Everything i see
Everything i do
Somehow ends up
Reminding me of you" give the message much more intensity. The metaphors in the third and the fourth stanzas were very well done, brought a picture to my mind which is pretty good. :-)

Keep it up
Lots of love
Sabine

awww thats so nice, and its so good!
geez ur really good!!
u got talent boi ...

God Bless,
Love ya Sam xo

aw.. thats soo sweet.. i love it.. and yeah the poems kinda tru i do knoe someone who got swept away from me because of all his auditions and stuff but he isnt big yet.. just broadway and commercials..and as much as it sucks for me.. ive seen him work.. and hes good.. soo im still happy for him.. lol