Comments : Love Lust Doubt And Denial

  • This is such a clever poem !!
    It's beautiful yet beautiful in a twisted, dark way...
    I really like this, it's well written and flows amazingly.
    There are some really clever rhymes that don't seem as though they've been forced together.
    Well Done !!
    <3 Charli XxX

  • This is such a clever poem !!
    It's beautiful yet beautiful in a twisted, dark way...
    I really like this, it's well written and flows amazingly.
    There are some really clever rhymes that don't seem as though they've been forced together.
    Well Done !!
    <3 Charli XxX

  • 19 years ago

    by LeXi

    i really like it. its really cool. write more!