by cochise Aug 7, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A boy on vacation came to her town, |
This poem is very deep and really express the emotion of true love being separated. I really enjoyed it. I would also appreciate it if you read some of the poems I've written on this site. I'm trying to get into the habit if writting peotry, and I would like to hear some critisism, and see what people woul;d rank my works. Thank you! |