I think this is a wonderful poem! You don't wanna add too many thoughts, anyway, just to make a poem longer. That would ruin a poem! Thanks for gracing the public with such a beautiful poem! You're once again invited to join me in the discussion boards. If you don't know what I'm talking about, check your e-mail!

Much love,
Poetvoices

Very good, actually, i loved this one,, keep it up*

I liked this one a lot. I've felt like this many times before.

I know exacly wot you mean iv felt like this to very gud xxxjessixxx

I know how you must felt that day, just hang in there, i loved that poem, poems don't have to be long to be great. heck mine are short. xoxo Rach